Zachary Ferderer
September 7, 2013
English 326
Learn By Doing (Revised)
When
it comes to schooling, the general public will be quick to blame any lack of
understanding from the student on the teacher.
This is very true in some cases, but like anything in this life, there
are always two sides. It seems like everyone considers a teachers [MISSING THE “S”]
job to be one thing: to regurgitate some idea or concept to a student or
students in a way that allows them to regurgitate that information back to the
teacher (but in “their own words”) so that they can remember the answer when it
comes up on a test (because apparently that’s how students show “understanding”). I find this to be missing the point [CHANGED TO MAKE THE
WRITING MORE APPROPRIATE]. The point of
school is to learn, and the job of the teacher is to show students how to learn. Instead, most of us will
sit down and pretend to understand what some instructor is verbally throwing up
so we can cipher through the mess and hope to some deity that we pass the final
test in a class, which we will then inevitably forget all about during summer…
It’s not a pretty scenario but that doesn’t make it any less true.
In Cordeiros “Dora Learns to Write and in the Process Encounters
Punctuation”, Dora
[NEEDED TO INSERT THE TITLE AND AUTHOR] was lucky enough to find a rare gem as
a teacher instead of the walking textbook that most get dealt. Learning
anything at a young age is difficult, everyone knows that. Now, throw in some sentence structure and
punctuation into the mix and add a little dash of their short attention span
and these kids may as well be learning the mechanics of Shakespeare (if that’s
even a thing). What Dora’s teacher does
that works [CHANGED
FROM PAST-TENCE] so well was that she let Dora ponder the ideas of punctuation
little by little on her own. When
Dora has a question she goes to her peers and they bounce ideas off of one
another. Then, when the time comes for Dora to present her writing, her teacher
tells her what she has done correctly and then simply adds new information for
her to consider. And as time goes on, Dora begins to understand. She learns what works and what doesn’t
through experience. That experience
will stick with her longer than anything and much easier than trying to just
remember the facts. Learn by doing.
Of course there are downsides to everything and teaching
methods are no exception. Students will revert back to a certain way of
thinking if they get to confused or frustrated while attempting to understand
any new concept. In Dora’s case, she went back to end-page styled periods when
she struggled with the end-line concept. Eventually she would grow back to the
end-page method and continue growing from there. Sometimes three steps forward
can result in one step back, but in the end she will be more the wiser for it
and as previously stated, those concepts will stick with her better because she
experienced them instead of having to regurgitate some amount of facts about
it.
Hey there, nice paper! I noticed a couple of things on making nouns/pronouns possessive. The first was, "It seems like everyone considers a teachers job to be one thing..." "teachers" should have an apostrophe ("teacher's) to make it possessive, otherwise it's plural.
ReplyDeleteLater on, you cite Cordeiro's article by saying "In Cordeiros 'Dora Learns to Write and in the Process Encounters Punctuation', Dora was lucky enough to find a rare gem as a teacher instead of the walking textbook that most get dealt." Here you need an apostrophe on "Cordeiros" (Cordeiro's) to show possession of the article, otherwise it's plural.
That's all I noticed!
Thanks for the helpful tips!
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