In all our years
in schooling we were taught specific ideas and rules about writing. And almost every year we
would be told that what we had previously learned the year(s) before is wrong
(or at least not fully correct). When I decided to sign up for
this class, I accepted the notion that a fairly large amount of what I believed
I knew about grammar and everything involving the subject would plausibly be
incorrect. I could not have been more intrigued.
While I have always considered myself a decent writer, I do run into minuscule errors
more frequently than I would care for; errors such as a run on sentence or two,
or using a semicolon incorrectly, etc. And, like the snow in Pullman, many of
these little things would build up and I would end up with something as
confusing as Pullman’s weather. So, as far as this semester of class goes, there are definitely
a few particulars I would care to fix.
Apparently run on
sentences are a large problem I have. I enjoy explaining things in great
detail and because of that I struggle to form cohesive, shorter, sentences.
Instead, I make a sentence anywhere from two to five lines in length. While it
may sound correct in my head, often it becomes quite the opposite once on paper. So, a skill I would
like to be taught this semester is how to correctly use symbols such as colons,
semicolons, dash marks, commas, and so on to help mend my exaggerated
sentences. Though this seems like a task I should have mastered well before college,
as I have said before, it is hard to really know what is correct with the rules
changing so frequently. One professor says it is one way, a different professor
says something else, not to mention the computers now having the ability to
virtually tell me I am wrong (thank god that little paper-clip dude is no
longer with us…).
There are so many
little nitpicked things about writing that I just want to master, the majority
of which I have already stated. It would be ridiculous of me to list
every single matter out and explain in detail the problems I have with writing,
mostly because that would take too long. I do not have the time, nor the inclination, to explain
in detail obviously, and you, as the reader, certainly do not have the
patience for it. My point being that what it is I want to learn or take away
from this class is the ability to fully understand how grammar works within
writing. I want to know all the ins and outs, all the small details, because
fixing those small details will add up in a big way.
Hey Zach,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, great work! After reading over your blog, it seems to me that you had met the requirements of the assignment. However, for some reason, your two sentences that start with "and" are throwing me off. To me, it seems that they may be better off without them, or possibly writing a different transitional word or two to flow the sentences better. Next, I noticed that you correctly used a semicolon to connect two sentences, and you also used the word nor towards the bottom of your blog to connect the two ideas that link together. I thought that was impressive! Especially because I do not think I have ever used the word nor in one of my papers,
So, after your reviewing your blog, I believe you did great and met the expectations of every task on this assignment. Keep up the great work!
Everett Klodt